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I have read the article "why TV is bad for us" and I want to express my opinion on it.
TV really does people lazy. When the person watches TV, he becomes very passive. People spend in front of the TV sometimes the most part of the time. We are lazy to go outside and just to breathe fresh air. When we watch TV, we dont use the brain at all. Very often on TV dont stage the intellectual show and it is the fact. The fact also is that on TV manifestation of violence is brightly expressed. But fight against it. Censorship and restriction of age is established.
In my opinion, TV badly influences people. Instead of the active recreation useful to health, people choose passive and useless rest.

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I have read the article"why TV is bad for us" and I want to express my opinion on it. 
TV reallymakes people lazy. When a person watches TV, he becomes verypassive. Sometimes people spend in front of TV most of their time. We are lazyto go outside and just breathe fresh air. When we watch TV, we dont use ourbrain at all. The fact is that TV doesnt very often stage intellectual shows. Alsoviolence is brightly expressed on TV. But the law tries to fight against it.Censorship and restriction of age is established. 

In myopinion, TV influences people badly. Instead of the active recreation, which is good forhealth, people choose passive and useless rest.