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"My summer job"

This summer I want to experience some fun and try to earn money.
Im planning on applying for a job as a steward in a restaurant.
My friends will help me with this job.
I hope that this job will be interesting, exciting and that Im able to earn enough money.
But my main goal in this job is getting more experience in dealing with people.
Also, this summer I would like to start creating websites, because I got some ideas for a profitable business and I have friends who do this.
But despite the fact that I will work, Ill communicate with my friends and people who help me master the English language.
I want to get a lot of fun...
I hope, Ill remember this summer for a long time!

because I have some ideas...

I have friends to make deal with

But though I will work...

who help me to master..

исправь))))

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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